Ooh Becca, it is so kind of you to write an entire novel for me. 😂I love this. Your passion really shines through. I suppose i may be sensitive to the fact that i am lacking the education required. I left school at 16. And have zero writing tuition under my belt (although I have booked to go on a course later this year GULP!) I don't even know what a literary device is tbh.
It's interesting you mention Stephen King, because I have just bought his book "On Writing". It's in my To Read pile glaring at me. Thank you for everything you have shared. This was really meant to be about giving a lift to a new writer (please read his piece - it's awesome and he has less than 100 followers) BUT it has turned into something very valuable for me in terms of feedback on writing in general. A💚