No. It comes across as honest. And there are those who stay stuck in victimhood rather than shifting into being survivors. It is not good. It is not bad. But I tend to shy away from those people. Sometimes I get brave and ask them directly: what gains do you think you are getting from staying in this place of being a victim? Sometimes the question is enough to force a shift. Sometimes it isn't. I'm so impressed with where you have taken this challenge TzeLin. And your poem is just fabulous. Really awesome.