LOVE THIS ONE!! I'm studying what makes stories work and yours is a great example. Cracking headline, tick. The perfect photo, tick. A catchy opening to draw me in, tick. Well structured with humour to keep me reading, tick. And a fab ending to leave me wanting more, tick. Thanks for the lesson. Our dogs were terrified of fireworks so i got a recording of some and started playing it really quietly at all hours of the day, gradually increasing the volume. It worked! They sleep through them now. Thought I'd share that. A🙏💚