I am so sorry I missed this and indeed part 1 when you published. There is something going wrong with my email and I'm not receiving notifications when you publish. Your imagination is incredible. You bring the scenes to life so vividly that it felt as if I was watching a movie.

Who is Neff? And are you writing this for Neff or for readers on Medium?

If it is the latter, can I suggest that you break this down into Parts that are only 4 minute reads?

Most people on Medium will not read anything longer than 3-4 minutes. Sad but true.

Of course, if it is just for Neff, then ignore me!!

In kindness, A 🙏💚