Hi Ashlynn. I hope you don't take this the wrong way. It is written in kindness. I just wonder if you would consider formatting your poem in a way that makes it easier for me to read.? (Not just me, because I've had a lot of feedback which suggests my preference is true for most). No offence taken if you prefer the spaces, but thought I would let you know. I live by the maxim that you are more likely to get what you want if you ask for it. So I'm just asking πππ
https://annietrevaskis.medium.com/to-those-who-write-poetry-on-medium-6f51f3982fb8